Milestone-Proposal talk:The Deutsches Museum, Special Citation in History, 1903

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1. Is the proposal for an achievement rather than for a person? If the citation includes a person's name, have the proposers provided the required justification for inclusion of the person's name?
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3. Were there prior or contemporary achievements of a similar nature? If so, have they been properly considered in the background information and in the citation?
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11. Does the proposed plaque site fulfill the requirements?
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Independent Expert Reviewers’ Checklist

1. Is suggested wording of the Plaque Citation accurate?
2. Is evidence presented in the proposal of sufficient substance and accuracy to support the Plaque Citation?
3. Does proposed milestone represent a significant technical achievement?
4. Were there similar or competing achievements? If so, have the proposers adequately described these and their relationship to the achievement being proposed?
5. Have proposers shown a clear benefit to humanity?

In answering the questions above, the History Committee asks that independent expert reviewers apply a similar level of rigor to that used to peer-review an article, or evaluate a research proposal. Some elaboration is desirable. Of course the Committee would welcome any additional observations that you may have regarding this proposal.

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Submitted date: 29 August 2024
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Original Citation Title and Text as Submitted -- Administrator4 (talk) 17:14, 11 September 2024 (UTC)

The Deutsches Museum, Special Citation in History, 1903

Founded more than a century ago, the Deutsches Museum is one of the largest and most important museums for science and technology in the world. The vision of the museum's founder Oskar von Miller to create a walk-in encyclopaedia that can be experienced has been realized in an amazing way. Masterpieces of technology and engineering create a unique collection that is second to none in the world.

Suggested Revisions to the title, dates, and citation -- Bberg (talk) 20:02, 12 September 2024 (UTC)

Thank you for this proposal. I feel that critical information is missing from the current proposed citation, so please consider this revised title/dates and 70-word citation:

The Deutsches Museum, 1903-1925
Founded in 1903, the Deutsches Museum is the world’s largest science and technology museum. Oskar von Miller’s vision of a walk-in encyclopedia building opened in 1925 in Munich, and branches in Bonn and Nuremberg opened later. Its broad thematic range of exhibits includes engineering, atomic physics, aeronautics, chemistry, and transportation. On display are important examples of computers, microelectronics, automobiles, aircraft, printing presses, and engines, and historical research is also conducted.

Brian Berg, Milestones Subcommittee Chair

Re: Suggested Revisions to the title, dates, and citation -- Joachim Wiest (talk) 10:43, 21 October 2024 (UTC)

Thank you for the revision. We discussed it and have the impression that an enumeration of examples can not be exhaustive due to the limited space. Same is true for the branches (there is also one in Oberschleißheim and another site in Munich). We propose the following modification for further discussion:

The Deutsches Museum, Special Citation in History, 1903
Founded in 1903, the Deutsches Museum is the world’s largest science and technology museum. Oskar von Miller’s vision of a walk-in encyclopedia building opened in 1925 at the Museumsinsel in Munich, and other branches opened later. Its broad thematic range exhibits masterpieces of science and technology which create a unique collection that is second to none in the world.
Joachim Wiest, IEEE Germany Milestone Officer