Milestone-Proposal talk:The Atlas computer and the Invention of Virtual Memory: Difference between revisions
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== Minor edits -- [[User:Rmuttram|Rmuttram]] ([[User talk:Rmuttram|talk]]) 14:10, 28 February 2021 (UTC) == | |||
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Revision as of 14:10, 28 February 2021
7th February 2021 update -- Rmuttram (talk) 16:22, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
Proposal revised following discussions between proposal team and the Advocate to include a strong justification for the inclusion of Tom Kilburn's name on the Milestone Plaque and additional references.
Citation updated -- Rmuttram (talk) 10:56, 10 February 2021 (UTC)
Following discussion with the Advocate and amongst the team the citation has been updated to include University 'of Manchester' to facilitate future search effectiveness.
Minor restructuring -- Rmuttram (talk) 11:29, 13 February 2021 (UTC)
Tom Kilburn's IEEE awards moved up to the name justification section. Other minor edits.
Structural amendments for clarity -- Rmuttram (talk) 16:20, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
Photographs and diagram now embedded in text, Quotations indented and italicised. A few minor textual amendments.
Minor edits -- Rmuttram (talk) 12:20, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
Small changes and additions as a result of dialogue with the Advocate and Experts.
Minor edits -- Rmuttram (talk) 14:10, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
One additional reference added. Text re multics updated. Other minor textual amendments.
