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Latest revision as of 18:57, 27 February 2015

The sentence about the traitorous 8 is confusing and out of context with someone unfamiliar with the story. I suggest either deleting the reference or making it more clear.

I suggest changing one of the references to Silicon Valley in the first sentence to the actual geographic valley where it is located.