Special:Badtitle/NS90:Milestone-Proposal talk:Invention and development of vapor-phase axial deposition (VAD) method for mass production of high-quality optical fiber for telecommunication/Citation editing

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A nice proposal and a good milestone. A couple of suggestions regarding the citation: The title seems pretty long. Would too much be lost if you used "Vapor-phase Axial Deposition Method for Production of Optical Fiber, 1977"? Note that I have also just used the 1977 date. I infer that the process was developed over the period of years noted but it seems that the invention was in 1977. Finally, I suggest that NTT be spelled out the first time NTT is used in the citation.