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Is there still a public presence at the building where Dr. Lauterbur did his research?  Will that building remain intact in the foreseeable future?
Is there still a public presence at the building where Dr. Lauterbur did his research?  Will that building remain intact in the foreseeable future?
===Re: RE: The first magnetic resonance image (MRI) -- [[User:Jjtaub|Jjtaub]] ([[User talk:Jjtaub|talk]]) 22:24, 3 April 2017 (UTC)===
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Thank you for your comments.
I have changed the proposed plaque citation as per your suggestion and corrected any typos in the proposal.
The building where Dr lauterbur did his work will remain in tact.
Please let me know if there are other comments.
Jesse Taub

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RE: The first magnetic resonance image (MRI) -- Jason.k.hui (talk) 16:10, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

In the proposed plaque citation, suggest replacing the word "substance" with "object" as noted in Dr. Lauterbur's Nature publication. Would it sound better to rearrange the third sentence to "This demonstration was a major advance for Magnetic Resonance Imaging (MRI) and paved the way for its worldwide usage as a noninvasive method to examine body tissue for disease detection?" Note there are a number of typos in the citation. Please correct and re-enter in the milestone proposal.

Is there still a public presence at the building where Dr. Lauterbur did his research? Will that building remain intact in the foreseeable future?

Re: RE: The first magnetic resonance image (MRI) -- Jjtaub (talk) 22:24, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

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Thank you for your comments. I have changed the proposed plaque citation as per your suggestion and corrected any typos in the proposal. The building where Dr lauterbur did his work will remain in tact.

Please let me know if there are other comments. Jesse Taub