Milestone-Proposal talk:Keage Power Station: The Japan’s First Commercial Hydroelectric Plant, 1890-1897.

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Citation -- Djkemp (talk) 08:04, 8 October 2015 (CDT)

I think the citation is not suitable. It is not clear and grammar needs improvement. The milestone merits are not apparent in the citation. As such i cannot support the proposal

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