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== Dear Proposer -- [[User:JaninA|JaninA]] ([[User talk:JaninA|talk]]) 21:10, 8 September 2018 (UTC) ==
please find my further notes and comments in respect to the Milestone. I hope they will be of some help.
Kind regards
Janina
Notes:
''''''1. Why different dates in the Proposal?''''''
Year or range of years in which the achievement occurred:
1961 to 1989
Title of the proposed milestone:
The active shielding of Superconducting MRI Magnets (1984-87)
Plaque citation summarizing the achievement and its significance:
At this site between 1986 and 1987......
We therefore proposing that this milestone be focused on the third major element that has enabled the widespread and flexible adoption of these machines - Active Shielding which was developed at the Eynsham site with the first actively shielded magnet completed in 1986 leading to the first MRI machine deployment at 1.5 Tesla in 1989.
2. '''How the public can access the site is missing?''''''
How is the site protected/secured, and in what ways is it accessible to the public?
The site is a significant design and manufacturing location and is staffed on a 24/7 basis throughout the year.
3. '''Why differences in the name?'''
Who is the present owner of the site(s)?
Siemens Magnet Technology Ltd., part of Siemens Healthcare
and Siemens Magnet Systems have recently developed a 7T magnet which was runner up for the prestigious UK Royal Academy of Engineering MacRobert Award in 2016.
4. '''Only l/5 of the text for the section titled What is the historical significance of the work (its technological, scientific, or social importance)? is devoted to the topic of the proposed Milestone. The rest is devoted to the principle of the MRI itself… Also the part dealing with a building where early work was conducted (in a different location) is a bit confusing. Once could think it refers to the building where the plague is to be.

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Citation -- JaninA (talk) 20:14, 8 September 2018 (UTC)

Dear Proposer,

may I suggest that you have a look at the citation in the nomination. The second sentence is too long and not grammatical...

Also there is no information which IEEE Unit will pay for the plague.

Kind regards

Janina

Dear Proposer -- JaninA (talk) 21:10, 8 September 2018 (UTC)

please find my further notes and comments in respect to the Milestone. I hope they will be of some help.

Kind regards

Janina

Notes: '1. Why different dates in the Proposal?' Year or range of years in which the achievement occurred: 1961 to 1989 Title of the proposed milestone: The active shielding of Superconducting MRI Magnets (1984-87) Plaque citation summarizing the achievement and its significance: At this site between 1986 and 1987......

We therefore proposing that this milestone be focused on the third major element that has enabled the widespread and flexible adoption of these machines - Active Shielding which was developed at the Eynsham site with the first actively shielded magnet completed in 1986 leading to the first MRI machine deployment at 1.5 Tesla in 1989.

2. How the public can access the site is missing?' How is the site protected/secured, and in what ways is it accessible to the public? The site is a significant design and manufacturing location and is staffed on a 24/7 basis throughout the year.

3. Why differences in the name? Who is the present owner of the site(s)? Siemens Magnet Technology Ltd., part of Siemens Healthcare

and Siemens Magnet Systems have recently developed a 7T magnet which was runner up for the prestigious UK Royal Academy of Engineering MacRobert Award in 2016.

4. Only l/5 of the text for the section titled What is the historical significance of the work (its technological, scientific, or social importance)? is devoted to the topic of the proposed Milestone. The rest is devoted to the principle of the MRI itself… Also the part dealing with a building where early work was conducted (in a different location) is a bit confusing. Once could think it refers to the building where the plague is to be.